szaleniec1000 Jul 18, 2014 21:10
show don't tell, did not do the bloody research, significant glance, expospeak, pov!fail, welsh railway, are you a witch or not, americanisms in the potterverse, retcon yay, creepiest toddler ever, have i mentioned i hate this fic, tractum ex culo, hermione in name only, totally radical, you fail paediatrics forever, convention of the psychics, breast fixation, wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey stuff, separated by a common language, onion slicing convention, badfic:hogwarts overexposed, department of redundancy department, too much information, completely nonsexual, thirty contrivance pileup, anvil of foreshadowing, i can has characterisation, statute schmatute, meticulous planning, oh dear maths, pop goes the house-elf, worst dating advice ever, harry potter, idiot balls for everyone, continuity isn't optional, snape is ooc, literally stupid, education system from hell, approved hogwarts exposed dialogue voice